tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3180082637989901619.post5317807129110236374..comments2023-03-22T08:09:45.562-07:00Comments on David Lawrence Illustration: Nu Roughs 1-9David Lawrencehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02437981235122475501noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3180082637989901619.post-38934177776385342252010-10-08T03:03:24.701-07:002010-10-08T03:03:24.701-07:00First image needs epic perspective I think. The mi...First image needs epic perspective I think. The middle ones are odd because it seems to me like that would be the perfect time to use comic book style panels of sequence and you haven't? Lol. Just to make it clear, I'm not totally against them *where appropriate*. I love the idea for the last image. I think it ill work really well visually.<br /><br />As for the wolf breaking through the canvas, I see that event as being the "NOW YOU HAVE TO PAY ATTENTION TO ME" moment. I think it may be conveyed better if instead of breaking it, he simply knocks it over. Like, he bounds towards it and knocks it... I'll scribble this down.<br /><br />I have some sketched up ideas which, I doubt you'll use, but I'll upload them later. I've also made some textures and I'll take them to some of your roughs later on.Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18288620959846712806noreply@blogger.com