After the feedback email and a little chat with Dave, I printed all three faces and annotated what to fix across the board...
So here I have my improved Kipps image - same sort of idea, and dw this isnt gonig to be my final. This just has a lot fo the tweaks to se show how its changed... The collar is higher and adjusted, the chin (which I agree looked more like a beard) has been simplified to a line orrr completely removed... still deciding that. And Im not THAT fond of the highlight on the hat's brim... Oh, and I am learning to use the pen tool for making shapes etc. Its difficult...
old image for reference ^
and now the new onessss... minor tweaks to chin and nose. Opinions would be lovely!
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