MJRyder book covers commish

Just seeing if anyone wants to drop feedback on preference for these covers. Please ignore how rough and crappy they are... they are just roughs after all.....  Wuv Woo All.

New Starters

from Pokemon, fancied drawing them... Tsutaja is the grass, Pokabu the fire and Mijumaru the water. Sorry about the colour quality, I was missing an orange for Pokabu, used the wrong shade of green for Tsutaja's belly and the scanner didnt pick up most of the fine blue in the water spout...

What do you think

Of these? Which do people prefer? I know theres not a lot in it, the first has no shading, the second has shading, the third removes bingo wings, the fourth adds two letters and a punctuation mark.

Feed me feedback pls.

Olympic Mascot doodle

Olympic Mascot doodle, in no way, shape or form is this guy owned by me... was inspired because Mandeville (that is his name) just looks a little like metal sonic.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wenlock_and_Mandeville for more

Some train drawings

Drawings. From the train journey home today. Central line was nice.

Put the more successful up top, less successful lower...

Last page...

OK, this is the last of the 11 pages I inked. I feel a bit shit right now cos I am running out of time to put in the dialogue. Maybe I should just print them blank.

Another page down... maybe

I like the minimalism of this one, but could work back in to it some more if people have opinions?

Two Up

Ok, I only have two more pages to tone... and theyre both pretty intense. Will both take two hours each minimum. But I can smell the finish line, and it smells like whiskey and/or cider.

I am unsure about the black in the background... it feels necessary to show the depth of the space but it might just be my abuse of the gradient tool which is annoying me... I have a nagging feeling Im going to be let down by the scan quality when it all gets printed... Well, we shall see!

Next page!

Im sure Im pissing everyone off with individual page updates, but I like doing it and thats what counts. Anywho, I will aim to do two more before I update, maybe it wont clog up everyones stream too much...

I am not that happy with the splat, I didn't feel comfortable putting in liquidy highlights nor pushing the bloody goodness too far with lots of splattage... well. if I get a chance, I might try some splattage with ink on paper and scan that bad boy in, tweak my nipples etc

Last page of today

This tooka couple of hours... Bit longer than I hoped. Anyway, pretty happy with this page. I hope it isnt too confusing, whats going on in the bottom two panels...