Wednesday, 5 May 2010


OK, I want some feedback on how this has turned out. Do you like it? Dislike it? like the use of tone but is there too much of it? anything you dont like the look of? Hate it? Drop me whatever thoughts you have, I need to know if this works or not as I have two days to get this biznitch wrapped up and ready to print.


  1. that is some dam good art there mr DL :) thumbs up!!! (Y)

  2. I prefer it without tone. But maybe this isn't the best page to show off the tone you had in mind.

    If I were you, I'd save yourself the work and stress and call it done.

  3. It has really good suspense and sequential imagery and very clear to see what is happening. The tone is great but I love the little bit of red colour because it brings attention to the important moments of the sequence.

    I think the tone works really well! It makes it really interesting and makes it fit into the genre of comic book art really well. Although the tone also makes it look more of an inner page rather than a piece to stand on its own.