Friday 8 October 2010

Edits

ok, some ideas Im unsure about, and some other stuff. Also, took an idea of Joeys and washed David over it.

Very unsure about the middle section still...

10 - 11 - 12, in a previous post 10 and 11 were combined.

13-14, here the protagonist is escaping the pipes, and then landing in an extremely boring, not-very-dynamic way. This would need touching.

new page 2-3 (we are probbly going to have page 1 start on a right page now, meaning numbers will be bumped up one...) and 13 now a two page 13-14 spread. hmm.

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