I did some drawings. Still improving layouts.
please ignoe the purple strip... Joey said he liked the way GREW was written so I thought, if he wanted to do some development on this page, he would have access to the scratchy scratchy wordy wordy.
not as good as above...
originally, the left page had the guy drawing the circle in the opposite direction, but I think this is better.. theres a line/curve which slides down from the palm/middle finger/arm which is quite nice. The pencil cuts straight across, but it serves to bring attention to the use of the pencil, so I think its obtrusiveness in the layout is acceptable. The right page will probbly need some tweaking, but the idea is solid enough....
hmm. not sure.
My preferred design. I think the top of page 10 could be side on... or tilted. I dunno. Up to experimentation I supposeee. Bottom of page 10 would give the brief pause to show 'escape'... I like the right page, making use of the howl. This would lead in to page 12 being more dynamic with an impact like a previous iteration...
way. too. basic.
falls. lands. ouch. dusts self off. pause. HOOOOWWWWWLLLL